VN Others Abandoned L.I.F.E [v0.01] [Thedeviantsmind]

it’s unfinished, it will be finished, and I didn’t plan to release it yet, because I wanted to do some more, but every time it’s “do some more, do some more” so I realized I’d never get any feedback that way, so this is for feedback, it’s a demo some of it is text alone, some is accompanied by images. Really want to know what people think. If they like the characters, does the writing suck, let me know. I don’t normally from a first person perspective, so, it’s fairly new.

So I wanted to give you an idea of how the different choices would affect the game, and there’s enough here that I could go based on. So like, if you choose, “Can’t say no.” as a weakness, then the scene with Carly, where she wants you to say whether or not you like her, you automatically say yes, you don’t have that choice. HOWEVER, then you’re get a choice asking if you actually do like her, which would then register that and that’ll affect the story going forward.

Let’s say you’ve chosen athletic, and great physique. Firstly, your relationship with Emma, is different, y’all weren’t close as kids, she doesn’t change from being dowdy chick. Nah, you were the star athlete, she was your nerd cousin. CAN YOU salvage that relationship, it’s possible, could it end with her inviting you to her house? No. But y’all could become close. (depending on your choices though, you and Emma can still have a good relationship and you can be athletic still). Also, after the end of the scene with Carly when you go back home, you meet Eric (someone’s son.) and based on the allowed choices in this version, y’all don’t get along, but, if you pick athletic, he knows you, off the bat, he practically gushes about who you are, and then you go on to pick which sport you played, and y’all can have this camaraderie.